Good morning Paul - Thank you for taking a good look. Yes, I was also flummoxed, after going through the manuals for the basic build and the upgrade, step by step, to try to spot an error in wiring.
Would a continuity (resistance) check on the wires help uncover the possibility of a broken wire? Although it's like looking for the proverbial needle in a haystack, if it's a possible method of spotting a broken wire, it would be worth the effort.
JS