On the 9 pin socket, look at pins 6 and 7. They look like they are almost touching. You really don't want these to touch, so trim those leads back!
The paragraph on the bottom of page 20 that's in bright red explains what we mean when we say "attach". It does not mean to slip a wire or lead through a terminal and just leave it there. You need to bend the leads around the terminals to make a mechanical connection before soldering. You have lots of wires and leads just resting inside terminals, so I would go back through and bend the free ends up against the terminal strips and tube socket pins, then reflow your solder joints.
I would also be extra careful that both black wires that attach to the headphone jack are captured by solder.