If you put a 33uF capacitor from the plate of the output tube to ground, you will short all your signal to ground, thus getting no output.
When you say you're interested in improving the bass response, you might want to clarify what you're looking for. The SEX amp is designed to provide flat frequency response, so if you want to boost the bass, you'd want to do some equalizing before the input of the SEX amp.
Increasing the 22uF capacitors before the driver supply plate load resistor will not have much if any influence on the output section of the amplifier, though it should be somewhat audible on the driver stage without the C4S modification.
Also, just some advice, doing repairs at Bottlehead periodically involves removing "improvement modifications" that lead to operational problems.