No, it's not right. Sorry if my directions are wrong, or confusing - I have a bad flu and I'm pretty punchy the last couple weeks!
The D cell negative should go ultimately to tube pin 5. D cell positive to pins 1/7. You should see about 1.5v at pin 5, and about 3.0v at pins 1/7.
There is the switch in the way, and I'm going back to bed without figuring it out yet ... maybe tomorrow unless PB steps in, he's more familiar with the wiring, I don't have a Quickie at home.